literature

His Sorrow

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Sitting there in an empty room,
nothing around him but spirits to loom.
Dark with despair, cold and alone,
nothing to him but a chill to his bone.

He sits there thinking of thoughts of the past,
thinking how his future may never last.
His tormented soul torn to shreads,
try to tie together the dangling threads.

He tries so hard for it all to end,
ignoring help his friends try to lend.
Once all feelings seem to return,
His soul cries and starts to burn.
Heh. This is so sad and depressing, but it seems good ^^

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Caoilifhi's avatar
It is one of those depressing things that seem to hook you. If I could memorize it'd be something I'd try to quote